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Gatsby Teacher Fellowships projects
 
Milestones indicating NC levels to aid feedback to pupils on how to improve
knowledge and skills
 
 
School: Shaftesbury School, Dorset
Fellow: Andrew Smith
Email: andrew@woodlakeclose.co.uk, andrew.smith@poole.gov.uk
 
Introduction
   
  Assessment for learning (AfL) now has a much higher profile in schools and one aspect of AfL is providing students with feedback on their work that identifies its strengths and helps pupils understand what they need to do to make progress. However, teachers in my school are very busy and not all of them are providing this sort of feedback. My project aims to support my colleagues and has three aims:
   
 
to create a differentiated feedback bank for a range of assessment activities so that students receive comments that help them to understand what they would need to be able to do to progress to the next level in that particular assessment
to design the feedback so that it also helps them to make progress against the Yearly Teaching Objectives for each of the five Key Ideas as published in the National Strategy
to use ICT to make it as easy as possible for the teacher to give detailed feedback and keep a record of the improvements suggested
   
  The first aim of this project appears to be in contradiction to the guidance in the National Strategy, which states that “assessment of pupils’ progress in the medium term should be made against the relevant yearly teaching objectives for each year for the unit of work, not against the level descriptions.” (p51). Pupils, however, remain very keen to understand why their work is awarded a particular level and what they can do to access a higher level. I am keen to design a feedback bank that not only gives them guidance on improving a particular assessment but also provides them with linkage to the yearly teaching objectives for each key idea.
   
  What has been achieved so far?
   
  The initial focus of work this term has been on defining exactly what the project is intended to achieve, and, surprisingly, this took longer than I expected. My original proposal was to create a differentiated feedback bank for a number of assessment tasks, but after some thought and discussion I decided that the feedback would be much more powerful for both students and teachers if it linked to the yearly teaching objectives for the five key scientific ideas that underpin the Key Stage 3 Programme of Study (cells, interdependence, particles, forces and energy) as set out by the Science Secondary Strategy and gave them not only the information they would need to improve in this particular assessment, but also a deeper understanding of progression through the NC levels that they could hopefully apply in different contexts in different topics.
   
  Once this decision had been made my efforts focused on experimenting with a feedback bank for a single assessment activity. The assessment that was chosen linked to the Year 8 QCA Module on ‘Heating and Cooling’ and the key idea of particles. After lessons on the different methods of heat transfer (conduction, convection and radiation) and insulation, students were given the assessment to complete as a homework activity. The assessment required them to make a poster to show how a cup of hot tea cooled down. A feedback bank was then created that detailed particular features of the work that would be required to achieve each level, and a suggested comment for improvement that would help them to move the work to the next level, and, more importantly, help them make progress against the yearly teaching objectives. The draft feedback bank has been trialed in several slightly different formats with some students. This has been a very useful activity as it has allowed me to make refinements and revealed weaknesses that might not otherwise have been apparent. Improvements that have been made as a result of the trial include making the feedback more individualised by including names and changing the phrasing of the feedback so that it is more accessible to students. Teacher comments have also been very pertinent to the development of this project and include concerns that the original feedback bank did not have enough choice and that for some students the feedback sentences were not appropriate and they had to make up their own.
   
  Once one feedback bank had been developed the next stage I considered was how to use ICT to make the feedback process as simple as possible to manage. Initially I used Microsoft EXCEL as an electronic feedback bank where teachers selected the appropriate comments for each pupil from a bank of statements and a mail merge was used to print out sheets that were attached to the assessment. However, this was found to be rather clumsy and inflexible so at the time of writing this report a new version of the electronic feedback bank is being created in Microsoft ACCESS.
   
  What is planned next?
   
  I am planning to create a more flexible electronic feedback banks for the assessment activity already trialed. This will include a wider range of feedback comments, the opportunity for teachers to write their own for those students who do not ‘fit’ the standard ones and the capability to print out the feedback comments on large self-adhesive labels that can then be quickly attached to the student’s work.
   
  Once an effective working system has been created for one assessment the next step will be to extend it to cover other assessment activities. The logical approach would be to focus on several assessments around one of the five key ideas (for example, particles), with the aim of creating a group of assessments whose feedback banks are linked together not only to allow students to make improvements in one particular assessment but across different contexts and topics within the chosen key idea.
   
  The National Strategy also says that ‘the principle is to mobilise medium-term assessments quickly into the setting of relevant and realistic targets.’ And how teachers will be able to use the assessment data gathered to set targets, and the support the package might provide, are things that will also need consideration.
   
  Finances
   
  Just over half of the first allocation of £1500 has been spent on the purchase of a basic laptop, an address label printer and Microsoft Access software. It is not anticipated that there would be many more ‘hardware’ costs. I anticipate that future costs will include paying for cover to release time for me to develop the feedback banks further, talking to teachers and pupils about improving each feedback bank and some longer term evaluation of pupil’s work in a particular key idea to find out if the feedback bank has helped them make progress through the yearly teaching objectives.
   
  At the end of the project I would like to be able to distribute these resources on a CD ROM to interested schools and colleagues. There will be a cost implication with this so I am keen to ‘ring fence’ a significant amount of the grant for this purpose.
   
  What will the final product look like?
   
  The final product will include a collection of assessments on CD-ROM for each of the key ideas in science. For each assessment there will be an electronic feedback bank where teachers (and students undertaking peer / self assessment) can select a ‘what went well’ comment and a ‘to improve further’ comment. There will be a good choice of comments available, names will be able to be inserted automatically and there will be the facility for the teacher to add his / her own comment if appropriate. The electronic feedback bank will output the comments printed on self-adhesive labels, which can then be attached to student’s work. A record will also be created of the feedback that has been given for future reference.
   
  To increase its flexibility, the resource will be designed such that users could add feedback comment banks for new assessments.
   
  What impact will this work have on students?
   
  I hope that the benefits to students will be numerous. First, they should receive good quality feedback that will help them to understand what it is they need to do to improve and progress to the next level in a particular assessment and through the yearly teaching objectives. Second, it is a resource that could be used in a very powerful way for peer and self-assessment by allowing students to use the electronic feedback bank themselves. It is intended that some time should be spent on this exciting aspect during the Summer Term.
   
  What impact will this work have on teachers?
   
  The aim of creating feedback banks is that it will raise the standard of written comments currently given to students by providing teachers with exemplar materials that they can further develop. The electronic aspect of the project will make it less onerous for teachers to give detailed written feedback to students by helping them to concentrate on the important issue of the quality of the comments rather than the mundane task of writing them out, which naturally limits what will be written both in terms of detail and quality. It will also allow teachers to track pupil progress against the yearly teaching objectives rather than simply recording progress as a list of levels achieved in various assessments.
   
  How will you evaluate the success of the project in relation to the intended outcomes?
   
  To evaluate the success of the project students will be surveyed on how well they think the feedback has helped them to progress, work scrutiny will be used to discover if the feedback has helped the students make progress against the yearly teaching objectives for a particular key idea and teachers will be interviewed about their opinions on the feedback bank.
   
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